Hey Jason I like how you did your butterfly double sided and how on the back it has a quote from the poem. Something I found interesting was that you used a red pen to color the whole butterfly and how you drew black and white striped to symbolize the suits of the jews. One question that I had was why did you put those years in your butterfly? But all in all I fell like you did a good job!
Your butterfly is well made. You have the Nazis on one side (plus years signifying that their rule was long), and a black and white side on the other. This is pretty clever, as it appears to match the desaturated feeling of hopelessness one would feel within the camp. The line from your poem is a nice touch too. However, your tags have some errors (I can’t see your quotes). They’re short, but I see what you’re going for. Your tags desperately need to be expanded upon and revised, but your butterfly is quite cleverly designed.
Great job on your butterfly Jason. I can see why the color red represents the blood, pain, hunger, torture, beaten, burned, death, and all the suffering from the Jews that were caused by the Nazis. I also agree that not only the author of your poem but everyone who was held prisoner dreamed of being released and set free again. To go back home with the people they love and care for, home where it felt safe. I only recommend you add your poem but good job overall.
Hey Jason I like how you did your butterfly double sided and how on the back it has a quote from the poem. Something I found interesting was that you used a red pen to color the whole butterfly and how you drew black and white striped to symbolize the suits of the jews. One question that I had was why did you put those years in your butterfly? But all in all I fell like you did a good job!
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ReplyDeleteYour butterfly is well made. You have the Nazis on one side (plus years signifying that their rule was long), and a black and white side on the other. This is pretty clever, as it appears to match the desaturated feeling of hopelessness one would feel within the camp. The line from your poem is a nice touch too. However, your tags have some errors (I can’t see your quotes). They’re short, but I see what you’re going for. Your tags desperately need to be expanded upon and revised, but your butterfly is quite cleverly designed.
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Max
Great job on your butterfly Jason. I can see why the color red represents the blood, pain, hunger, torture, beaten, burned, death, and all the suffering from the Jews that were caused by the Nazis. I also agree that not only the author of your poem but everyone who was held prisoner dreamed of being released and set free again. To go back home with the people they love and care for, home where it felt safe. I only recommend you add your poem but good job overall.
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